I posted some of my story Misfit in the fan fiction. I would like for you to read it and please feel free to tell what you think. I'm still working on it so if you can think of something to add let me know. Like I've said a couple of times, it's a vampire story. I don't like revising other people's writings so I write my own. hope you enjoy and if you want me to post more of Misfit just reply to this.