I guess I have a slightly different take on the ending of Brotherhood; I know a lot of folks liked it and that is great. But I left feeling rather sad and frustrated and I've watched the series many times but I no longer watch the last episode. I know that different people got different things out of the ending but this is what I got out of it.
Firstly, let me say that I did enjoy the series overall; I absolutely loved Scar. His character was, in my opinion, the most interesting in terms of development. There were some things here and there that I didn't care for or I thought could have been better done but this is just me being overly nit-picky. Secondly, as most people know, Brotherhood followed the manga fairly closely so my complaint is mainly about the ending in the manga.
In a nutshell, I didn't like the fact that Ed left. There are two reasons for this but the first is a bit complicated so I will stick to the second.
My second reason is more emotional. The ending, as I saw it, was incredibly cold. The proposal scene was actually touching, if you delete everything immediately before and after it. It was touching because, contrary to what many people suggest, he doesn't just confess his love to her; this was far more than a confession of love. He asks her to marry him! But then what does he do? He basically says “thanks for saying yes, I don't know when the hell I'll see you again, bye.”
What makes this worse is the fact that I strongly view Winry as a symbol of purity. She admits that she has loved him since she was a child (i.e. her love for him is pure as it began in a state of innocence – this is implied in the series and made clearer in the manga). I don't see this as a last ditch effort to “claim” her hand. I'm convinced that she would have waited for him as long as it took but that is what is so sad.
Ed leaves home at the beginning and actually does neglect those who have selflessly treated him like family but then he changes as the series progresses. And when it is all said and done, he leaves again. All he ever does is make her wait and this is really sad. He claims to care about people but then, it is almost as if he neglects one of the most important people in his life in search for something that he cannot qualitatively define. He wants to "help people" but what does that mean in this context? He leaves her for an abstraction, it seems to me, so he can see whatever, do whatever, and learn whatever about whatever.
My wife would have rightly slapped me if I asked her to marry me and then I told her see ya later, I'm not sure when I'm coming home.I wanted to hit him like Capt. Buccaneer did when they were at Briggs. All in all, the ending caused me to question whether or not Ed actually learned anything.
Okay, sorry for the rant.






Oh I definitely see where you're coming from. While I loved the ending in general, it did irritate me in a way that Ed left right away, too. Mostly for the reasons that you gave. However, Winry fully understood that Ed and Al both felt that they had to repay the people that had helped them get to where they were and maybe learn a couple new things along the way (he does have to find something new to do now that he can't use alchemy, after all). It is unfair that she would again be left behind to wait and worry, and I do feel that Ed should have taken her with him at the least. He also spent around two years with her, at home, before leaving again, so there is that as well.
But, it is shown in the last family photo that Ed has a wedding ring on his finger and they had two children. So he did come back relatively quickly (or so I assume, I can't imagine he left her waiting for too long) and we can assume that he's settled down since then. That made me feel better in general about the ending. It can be assumed that Ed is finally going to stick around and take care of his family because he's finished everything related to what caused him to leave in the first place.
All in all, I do see what you're saying, but I guess I don't view it in quite the same light though I do share some mild irritations. I agree about Winry though. She's always portrayed as so innocent (though tough), probably why when she does pick up the gun in episode 22 that it's all the more emotional.
Oh and yes, Scar was a great character. When I read in one of the Cowshed Diaries extras in the manga that Arakawa had a name picked out for him, I was so excited, but then she went and had him be all "I have died twice, so call me whatever." Kind of disappointing.
"My memories. My mistakes. My scars. My past. My future. I won't let you have a single one of them! I won't allow you to take from me the fact that I'm Elliot Nightray!"
-Elliot Nightray, Pandora Hearts
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Thanks. I'm glad I'm not the only one to see that.
They definitely get married; I guess my frustration lies in the fact that he leaves in the first place.
I do tend to agree with you about him returning quickly. Basically, both he and Winry were born in 1899 and he was about 18 when he left so that puts the year about 1917 when he leaves. The official FMA Chronicle does say they get married in 1917 so he can't be gone for long.
This is definitely pure speculation but at the beginning of the scene, he seems a bit irritated, almost as if he doesn't want to leave. Some people might suggest that he is nervous about proposing (possibly) but I like to tell myself that he is likely leaving because in some way, he still feels indebted to Al.
The end of episode 22 was, in my opinion, the second most emotional scene in the series, coming only in second place to episode 63 when Hoenheim returns to the family grave at the end
Yeah this series has some pretty heavy emotional scenes